A promising start for an IF, but the text is littered with spelling mistakes. Except that, the only problem I really have with the story is that a big enough deal isn't made about the mc realizing that magic is real and not something the average person knows about.
Sorry for the typos, I hope it wasn't too distracting! With my processing issues I'm not surprised I missed some. Once I have time I'm going to do more run throughs to try to catch everything. Thanks for letting me know!
As for the second point that was intentional! As the story goes on you'll obviously have more control over how MC reacts to things, but there are going to be flashbacks where they react in a similar way to major events due to dissociation. I know it might not be a choice players like, so I'll let people know now. Again after this it's really only in flashbacks unless the player continues to choose that as a coping mechanism lol
Omg I'm so excited to be the first to leave a comment. I basically ran here when i saw you uploaded on tumblr. Firstly well goddamn done!! ♥️ this is an amazing start and the hype leading up to it wasnt for nothing. You are a very articulate writer. I can't wait for more but well done and I'm so glad you got the demo out! 😇 Ima go tell you the same thing on tumblr real quick 🤣
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This is an absolute BANGER; it got me hooked from start to finish. Please continue the amazing work,I love it!!<3
A promising start for an IF, but the text is littered with spelling mistakes. Except that, the only problem I really have with the story is that a big enough deal isn't made about the mc realizing that magic is real and not something the average person knows about.
Sorry for the typos, I hope it wasn't too distracting! With my processing issues I'm not surprised I missed some. Once I have time I'm going to do more run throughs to try to catch everything. Thanks for letting me know!
As for the second point that was intentional! As the story goes on you'll obviously have more control over how MC reacts to things, but there are going to be flashbacks where they react in a similar way to major events due to dissociation. I know it might not be a choice players like, so I'll let people know now. Again after this it's really only in flashbacks unless the player continues to choose that as a coping mechanism lol
That sounds good. Also, while i called these "problems" they really weren't all that major😅
10/10 ✨❤️ Do I need to say more?!!!!
Thank you glad you enjoyed!
OMGGGG I LOVE THIS😭💕💕💕
Glad you enjoyed!!
Omg I'm so excited to be the first to leave a comment. I basically ran here when i saw you uploaded on tumblr. Firstly well goddamn done!! ♥️ this is an amazing start and the hype leading up to it wasnt for nothing. You are a very articulate writer. I can't wait for more but well done and I'm so glad you got the demo out! 😇 Ima go tell you the same thing on tumblr real quick 🤣
Hello from Tumblr lol