I never comment but knowing this is a new story I need you to know how much I love it already! You've set the whole story up in a way where I can't wait for the future of this story not only just for the intriguing plot and already well written characters but to understand the mystery of everything that's going on. So many secrets and overall stuff to discover with the main character as well that has me so excited for more! Like I love Rook already because there's obviously more at play here and it just has me more interested lmfao. There already being some angst with the main character and Rook was already interesting but now with everything going on has me eating it up even more ngl. But I also can't wait to see all the other characters in the future as well, of course. Definitely already a story i'm going to think about every once in a while and one i'm going to keep an eye out for- for updates!
A promising start for an IF, but the text is littered with spelling mistakes. Except that, the only problem I really have with the story is that a big enough deal isn't made about the mc realizing that magic is real and not something the average person knows about.
Sorry for the typos, I hope it wasn't too distracting! With my processing issues I'm not surprised I missed some. Once I have time I'm going to do more run throughs to try to catch everything. Thanks for letting me know!
As for the second point that was intentional! As the story goes on you'll obviously have more control over how MC reacts to things, but there are going to be flashbacks where they react in a similar way to major events due to dissociation. I know it might not be a choice players like, so I'll let people know now. Again after this it's really only in flashbacks unless the player continues to choose that as a coping mechanism lol
Omg I'm so excited to be the first to leave a comment. I basically ran here when i saw you uploaded on tumblr. Firstly well goddamn done!! ♥️ this is an amazing start and the hype leading up to it wasnt for nothing. You are a very articulate writer. I can't wait for more but well done and I'm so glad you got the demo out! 😇 Ima go tell you the same thing on tumblr real quick 🤣
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I never comment but knowing this is a new story I need you to know how much I love it already! You've set the whole story up in a way where I can't wait for the future of this story not only just for the intriguing plot and already well written characters but to understand the mystery of everything that's going on. So many secrets and overall stuff to discover with the main character as well that has me so excited for more! Like I love Rook already because there's obviously more at play here and it just has me more interested lmfao. There already being some angst with the main character and Rook was already interesting but now with everything going on has me eating it up even more ngl. But I also can't wait to see all the other characters in the future as well, of course. Definitely already a story i'm going to think about every once in a while and one i'm going to keep an eye out for- for updates!
10/10 loved the story ^^
This is an absolute BANGER; it got me hooked from start to finish. Please continue the amazing work,I love it!!<3
A promising start for an IF, but the text is littered with spelling mistakes. Except that, the only problem I really have with the story is that a big enough deal isn't made about the mc realizing that magic is real and not something the average person knows about.
Sorry for the typos, I hope it wasn't too distracting! With my processing issues I'm not surprised I missed some. Once I have time I'm going to do more run throughs to try to catch everything. Thanks for letting me know!
As for the second point that was intentional! As the story goes on you'll obviously have more control over how MC reacts to things, but there are going to be flashbacks where they react in a similar way to major events due to dissociation. I know it might not be a choice players like, so I'll let people know now. Again after this it's really only in flashbacks unless the player continues to choose that as a coping mechanism lol
That sounds good. Also, while i called these "problems" they really weren't all that major😅
10/10 ✨❤️ Do I need to say more?!!!!
Thank you glad you enjoyed!
OMGGGG I LOVE THIS😭💕💕💕
Glad you enjoyed!!
Omg I'm so excited to be the first to leave a comment. I basically ran here when i saw you uploaded on tumblr. Firstly well goddamn done!! ♥️ this is an amazing start and the hype leading up to it wasnt for nothing. You are a very articulate writer. I can't wait for more but well done and I'm so glad you got the demo out! 😇 Ima go tell you the same thing on tumblr real quick 🤣
Hello from Tumblr lol